Friday, 2 November 2012

The Halloween story

BANG! went the door. When I was in the haunted house I heard someone whispering in my ear like someone telling people my secrets. It was like coming from behind me but when I turned I did not see who it was . At the haunted house I was so scared I was calling for help. 
The people kept coming to the haunted houses for lollies but a sign said 'No trick or treat at this house.' but when I got released I gave all the people who came the lollies.

1 comment:

Jay said...

You started your story with a spooky hook and you used some short sentences to make it scary.I'm glad it had a happy ending though.
Mrs B

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